Solid Beat
It's a good solid beat, however, if there was a way to make it come back down after you have the big build, the loop would, well, loop much easier to the ears, and not sound chopped up. That's why I gave you a 7. However, I'm sure that if you could juse extend that one part at the end to make it decrescendo, it would definitely merit a 10 from me. So not knowing if this is you're first work or not, I'm gonna give you an 8 instead :D .